This Be The Verse: Choose Your Favorite (version 2)

This is my second version of ‘This Be The Verse: Choose Your Favorite’. As the final piece for my blog, I workshopped with my professor and a fellow peer in order to make this post its absolute best. We added a little, deleted some things, and I think it has come a long way. It truly is a different version from the first, and I hope its improvements symbolize my advances across the semester. 

Choose your Favorite:

Last week, Mr. Denton assigned us a homework task that could result in the exhumation of pain, sweat, and tears. If taken seriously, this assignment had the potential to stress out its victims, cause them to break down like a downtrodden car, or perhaps cave in, like that old abandoned house tucked behind the woods. My classmates and I were given the outrageous task of discovering our favorite poem and reading it aloud, for the next scheduled class period. The hard-smack-sound I heard in the back of the classroom was the two athletes high-fiving; they must’ve thought this week’s project was a simple and laidback one; however, I knew the truth of the matter. My favorite poem… I think I would need a lifetime to uncover an opinion.

How does one who is only twenty years of age have a favorite poem? So many poems are colorful and beautiful, meaningful, and bold. But how can I choose one that I have discerned as my favorite? I can recall unearthing a Shell Silverstein poem, when I was in sitting in my elementary school library.

William tell, William tell,

Take your arrow, grip it well,

There’s the apple– – aim for the middle– –

Oh well … you just missed by a little.

For some reason, this poem has stuck with me through the years, and I treasured it because it was short (I could remember it), and the character in the poem was notably historic. But this only taught me that poetry can linger with you, speak to you, and even change your mood or your views on particular topics; however, there are many poems I have memorized and admired in the past, and this does not mean that they are my favorites. I love poetry; I am a fan of poetry. I have attended over a dozen poetry events where I listen to poets passionately recite their poems. Yet, as I continue to add more and more poems to my repertoire everyday, there has not been that one poem that glows in the dark. After Mr. Denton’s class that day, after the homework was given, I sat on my bed, and I pondered this assignment. I glanced to my right and spotted the first X on the map- a book of poems. This is where the adventure began.

I began this journey at my first destination, my book of Bill Knott poetry. Bill Knott has been one of my favorite poets for only a few months now, and I find his honest and somewhat dark language to be striking and attractive.


Going to sleep, I cross my hands on my chest.

They will place my hands like this.

It will look as though I am flying into myself.

He speaks of beauty, love, and death in the glummest terms- it’s fascinating and also unique. He’s an outsider who knows of his honest place in this world; he knows where he stands in the public eye, and he is not afraid to encompass this outcast role. When I decided I wanted to be a Bill Knott fan several months ago, I investigated his history and found a humorous fact. He once faked his own death, and this is not surprising if you appreciate his poetry. Afterwards, he wrote of himself: “my poetic career is nugatory … no editor will countenance my work; I’ve been forced to self-publish my poetry in vanity volumes; I am persona non grata and universally despised or ridiculed by everyone in the poetry world.” Knott commonly spoke of those who didn’t value him. Imaginably he found it difficult to believe that people, such as myself, really admired and embraced his irrational mind.

“TO X”

You’re like a scissors

Popsicle I don’t know to

Whether jump back

Or lick

Come on… who can’t admire and grasp such a brilliant four-lined poem?

I admire Bill Knott’s poetry, and I respect his talent for making the most absurd and entertaining titles for hit poems; however, I did not find a poem of his that I felt comfortable calling my favorite. The next poet I decided to research was the noteworthy poet, Jon Sands, and it felt like I was flying across the country. Sands and Knott are very different poets. They are similar in the fact that they talk about topics in an honest way; however, Sands does not have an outcast appearance or a desire to transform light topics into gloomy ones. In my humble opinion, Sands fits in with the crowd. In one of his poems, he talks of the rapper, Ludacris, and on his personal blog he mentions his love for tuna fish sandwiches. His poems include taboo subjects, and he speaks his mind, he says what we are all thinking, with confidence and contention. If you’ve scrolled through my own blog, you know that I have seen him perform live, and what an incredible occasion that was. Sands is beyond friendly, beyond vulgar, and beyond amusing. He is without a doubt one of my favorite modern poets; check out some of his videos on YouTube- they’re sensational. But, once again… his poetry is tremendous and spot-on, and I could not choose a favorite.

As I sat at my computer staring at the poetry of Knott and Sands, I fatefully answered a phone call from my grandmother. Being a fan of poetry herself, I asked her what her favorite poem was, and she mentioned the well-known Yeats. I think the sole reason she likes his poetry is because he is a fellow Irishmen (let’s keep that between us). Regardless, the phone call from my grandmother had me thinking about family, and like the rapid ignition of a candlewick, an idea was sparked in my mind.

Let me back digress for one moment. I have a mom, a dad, and two sisters. I love my family; we are a happy, solid-foundation-ed family, and truly, although we argue over thoughtless matter, I could not ask for a better family. Freshman year, I took an English class, and while I sat in this class, the homesickness I felt towards my home was commonly enflamed. For some uncovered reason, my emotions could not be suppressed while in this class, most likely because the poetry I wrote and read embodied my love for my parents and sisters. A similar homework assignment was given to us in this course, where we didn’t have to choose our favorite poem, but we had to pick a poem to memorize and recite to the class. I expectedly chose a poem about family, a poem that had a sense of Knott in it. Philip Larkin’s ‘This Be the Verse’ was my chosen poem freshman year, and now it was going to be the poem I declared as my favorite.

The initial stanza is:

‘They fuck you up your mum and dad… They may not mean to, but they do…. They fill you with the faults they had…. And add some extra just for you.” I love this poem because I find it to be honest. There’s a sense of comedy in it, and yet, like Sands and Knott’s style, it has truth, the kind that most parents and children probably deny. I appreciate my family more than many college students I know, and I do not believe in Larkin’s negative words in the slightest. However, I do embrace the fact that I am a product of my family’s fuck-ups (excuse me), and as Larkin says, I am who I am because of their faults. It’s very difficult to call a poem my favorite; however, this one will forever be one of my top five. Perhaps I enjoy it because I get to say fuck whenever I perform it, but there’s also something so frank about the meaning that I am required to embrace it. To me, my family is faultless even though we can be occasionally disorganized or obnoxious in public. We may be flamboyant, perhaps dysfunctional, but my parents’ fuck-ups don’t affect me in the most damaging of ways. I love my family, and I love Larkin’s words.

What’s your favorite poem?



The Middle Gemini

Here is another poem I have been working on for the past few weeks. I really think the topic is interesting- horoscopes. However, my problem is that I think I may be telling more than I am showing. And of course, showing is must more interesting and attention-grabbing. Tell me what you think.

The Middle Gemini


While my sisters read Vogue and I, Cosmopolitan,

The calm of the moment settles a smile on my face.

Expectedly, my older sister interrupts my peace to harp,

And like a hovering hand above a flame, I eye the Horoscope in her hands.

She tells me my personality assures the accuracy of astrology,

Since it is two competing traits, like a tug of war game.

I shut my eyes tight, and I know she is full of input,

As she digs her talons into my back, with the words ‘innocence’ and ‘ferocity’.

“Bipolar,” my little sister pipes in without a sheer moment of hesitance.

“For one moment you’re calm, the next, your claws emerge.”

I roll my eyes and scoff at their lyrics- my claws….

But the jury has made the decision,

And they have agreed.

And my peaceful moment has entirely spoiled,

Like the most rotten apple you’ve ever tasted.

And they say harmoniously, like the two sisters of Cinderella,

“You are dictionary definition Gemini.”

Bill Knott: from my perspective

Bill Knott is a wonderful poet, but his poetry isn’t exactly a mood-brightener. He is cynical and certainly not saintly, and although his poetry is usually depressing and at times disturbing, there is definitely a beauty about it. I don’t know whether to feel sympathetic or apathetic towards the man, but I am hoping that this semester I can get in contact with him. Stay tuned! Perhaps I will post some images of our emails if I am so lucky to correspond with him. 

Hope these entertain you! They certainly made me laugh/ think. 


People who get down 

on their knees to me

are the answer to my prayers


I look harder

in my wallet

than in my mirror

I already know 

what it holds